Friday, 14 July 2017

Feedback on the Storyline So Far...

I spoke to Mr Andrews during today's lesson about my storyline to get his opinion on it and see whether or not it will work and that it suits the style of Wes Anderson's films. Here is the feedback I received:
- Needs refining and more detail
- Good concept
- Think about different ways to portray the different times that the film is set in

I will be working on my story over the weekend to refine it a bit more and to get a better idea of it in my head. I will also work out where I will film, the props and costumes I will need and screenshots I will need to prepare for my film (e.g. shots of chapter pages, letters, etc.). During the lessons next week, I should be able to begin to prepare my treatment and shot list.

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