Discuss your feelings about the production task: please justify your responses.
Are you satisfied with your trailer? (i.e. did it turn out as well as you hoped?)
I am not completely satisfied with my trailer, and I think that it could have turned out a lot better than it did. I didn’t put in as much time as I should have, and I think that if I did put spend more time filming and reshooting what I needed to, it would have been of a lot better quality and I would have been more satisfied with the final result.
Did the project require more/less time than you originally thought?
The project required less time than I originally thought, however, if I had spent more time on it then it would have been a lot better. My poor time management led to me leaving everything to the last minute, whereas I should have done it all early on then edited and re-filmed what I needed to without stressing. Editing this film took a lot less time than with my last film, and I think this is because I find it easier to use Final Cut Pro now. Last time it took a while as I was still kind of working out the different aspects of my shots that I could edit.
The project required less time than I originally thought, however, if I had spent more time on it then it would have been a lot better. My poor time management led to me leaving everything to the last minute, whereas I should have done it all early on then edited and re-filmed what I needed to without stressing. Editing this film took a lot less time than with my last film, and I think this is because I find it easier to use Final Cut Pro now. Last time it took a while as I was still kind of working out the different aspects of my shots that I could edit.
Would you like to change or improve any aspects of your final film (storyline, shots, editing, etc.)?
Firstly, I would like to change the dialogue of my film as it is bad quality and doesn’t completely match the person speaking it. I would also change the fact that my trailer is very linear, and I would do this by adding a voiceover, and more of a variety of shot types. I would also make aspects of the storyline more clear, for example, it is not obvious that the girl is in a detention room in the beginning, it just looks like a classroom.
If you could start the project again, what would you do differently?
If I could start the project again, I would make sure to film all of my film early on so that I have time for feedback and time to reshoot what I needed to. This would have made my film a lot better and I wouldn’t have been so rushed to get all the filming done towards the end of the project. I would have also made my trailer less linear, and certain aspects of the storyline clearer.
As this task focused on The Hero’s Journey, describe:
The specific narrative conventions, characters you included in the trailer?
In my trailer, I included the main aspects of The Hero’s Journey to make it obvious to the viewer that it was this type of film. The characters that are a part of the Hero’s Journey structure that I included in my trailer are the hero, the mentor, the goddess character and the villain, and these are the main characters of the actual film. The specific narrative conventions I included in the trailer are long shots in the beginning to establish the setting and to build tension, then fast paced shots towards for excitement.
How you used specific shot types to convey your story?
I used high angles when filming shots of the hero and in the beginning when she was sitting in the room, I positioned her so that she was on the right third of the frame and looking around outside of the frame to indicate that she felt trapped and show that she was not in control. When filming shots of the villain and other powerful characters, I filmed them from a low angle to indicate their control and power.
Whether the intended genre is depicted clearly or if this could be improved?
Whether the intended genre is depicted clearly or if this could be improved?
I believe that the intended genre of thriller could was clear in the trailer, however, if I were to improve this I would use the lighting more effectively in order to create more shadows, etc. such as hiding the villain’s identity with the use of shadows and lighting.
Personal reflection and evaluation: after your previous task, you were asked to reflect upon the project and identify aspects of planning, production and reflection, which could be improved.
Please explain which aspect you chose to focus on for this task and how you have made improvements?
After the last task, I chose to focus on improving my storyline. I think that I have made my storyline for this task a lot more interesting than the previous one, however, I still think I can improve on this. I tried to make the storyline of the film more interesting by planning it as soon as we got the task, meaning that I had more time to think and build on my ideas.
Reflecting upon your completed task, respond to the following points:
How did other people respond to your rough edit? Did you use their feedback to make changes to the film?
The people that I received feedback from for my rough edit told me that they could understand the storyline clearly and could identify the points of The Hero’s Journey clearly. I didn't really receive any criticism, however, when watching my trailer myself and finding things to improve on, I found that I needed to make the shots faster at certain points to make it more dramatic which I did.
Did you use the planning and analysis tools effectively? (i.e. ingredients list, storyboards, shot lists, etc.)
I believe that I used the planning and analysis tools effectively, especially the storyboards and shot list. I built my shot list off my storyboards which made it a lot easier to do, and I created a very detailed shot list which made filming a lot easier than it would have been without it. The shot list enabled me to do my editing more quickly as well, as I knew the exact order that my shots went in and for how long, however, I changed a couple of things around to make it look better.
Were there any problems or difficulties during filming and how did this affect your project? (Difficulties may include: shooting, technical, time management, teamwork, absences or editing, etc.)
The only major problem that I encountered was the fact that my laptop died on the Saturday before the final edit was due. This meant that I wasn’t able to finish my editing as I don’t have another Mac at home. However, I thankfully kept a backup of my Final Cut Library and all of my shots on my external hard drive so I was able to receive an extension for one night and just quickly finish the small amount of editing that I had left.
Discuss whether you undertook adequate and detailed reflection to support your work? (Look at your blog and consider if it looks like a term’s worth of work)
I believe that I undertook an adequate amount of reflections on my blog to support my work for the term, however, I think that I should have done a bit more. I forgot to do a reflection after every single time that I filmed as I was too busy editing, however, I still think that there are enough blog posts to support my work. Next term I aim to improve on this by completing more reflections throughout the task.