On Monday afternoon, I filmed the majority of the shots that I could do at home that did not require bright lighting, which were the shots of my dad. I like how they turned out - the ones of him laying on the bed eating popcorn were exactly how I pictured them. However, I did make a change from the shot list as I ended up having the shot just of my dad, and not me walking in as I had planned. This was because I thought that the planned shot didn't look as good and it would have been too long for my film anyway.
During class today, I edited the shots from Monday afternoon and I was a bit unsure of how to colour correct them in the same style as Anderson. This is because they are a blue tone, rather than the usual orange tone, and because they're a bit darker than my other, overexposed shots. When I edited them in class, the blue was way too dark and did not suit the style of the film, however with some help from Mr Andrews, I was able to transform it into a more pastel and light blue, which is what I was after. Here is one of the shots below:
The only thing that I would change about this shot is the fact that the bed frame is crooked, however I think that if I made it straight, dad would have been crooked instead of sitting straight. If I have time at the end of the project, I may re-film this, however it is not a priority at the moment.
I also filmed shots of the letter on Monday afternoon, however I will be re-filming them another time as I don't like the way that I have written it - my handwriting does not suit the aesthetic. I will be re-doing it with cursive handwriting to make it better resemble the letters in Wes Anderson's films.
At the end of the week, we had lesson where we watched everybody's rough edits, guessed the auteur that they were creating their film in the style of, and gave them feedback. All but one person guessed correctly that my auteur was Anderson and the main feedback that I received was that the story was not clear, however my colour correcting was good. I kind of hoped that I had gotten a bit more feedback as it obvious that I only had a small portion of the film for my rough edit meaning that it wasn't going to make sense, but I will just ask other people for feedback later on when the film is more put together.
Over the weekend, I will be filming a lot! I aim to finish the scenes of the journey, which I don't think will take too long, and then finish the scenes at home. I am glad that I couldn't film at school - I think my shots turned out better quality than if I were to have rushed them during the lesson, and I have been able to film at the exact locations that I wanted, rather than filming at alternatives on campus. It has also allowed me to edit and receive a lot of feedback during class, which has made the editing of my film look a lot better than previous assignments and my time management is a lot better as I am editing as I go, rather than leaving it to the last minute. I think that my time management has improved so much compared to last year and the year before as I am actually editing throughout the entire time of the project, rather than rushing it at the end, and I am so glad that I have done this because it is better quality and I am not stressed at all about the assignment.