In class today, I received some feedback for my film. I found out that it's not very clear that the guy she murders is a patient of the same hospital; it just looks like a random guy that she has murdered, and that is the reason she is in the psychiatric hospital. So to fix this, I will be filming shots of him and of them together in the cafeteria as a flashback, before he is murdered. This will hopefully make it more obvious that he was previously a patient.
Tomorrow, I will be re-filming the counsellor scene during lunch break and then filming the ending of the film, as well as shots of the boy in the cafeteria as a part of the flashback.
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