Today in class, I finished putting together and editing the shots I have completed so far. I lowered the exposure, made the colour of the majority of the shots blue-ish, as well as a couple of other things. Here is an example of one of the shots:
After school, I filmed the remaining shots that I could do without Eliza. I filmed close ups of myself writing in the diary, close ups of the hospital documents and shots of the dead body and knife. This didn't take very long which was good, because then I had time to add them to the edit and finalise my rough draft which is due tomorrow. The shots that I have left to film are when the girl is leaving the counsellor, when she is entering the cafeteria and sits down (after leaving the counsellor), and the revealing shot.
I am not completely happy with the rough draft as it hasn't come out the way I pictured. There are shots that need to be re-filmed, such as the beginning, which will hopefully make it better and I will be more satisfied with the final result. Also, I need to make the blood more realistic in the shots of the dead body. I was playing around on Final Cut and worked out how to edit the colour of a particular section (such as the blood), and I made it stand out more as a brighter red as it didn't look like blood, due to the lowered exposure and saturation. It worked in some shots, but it was too vibrant in others, looking very fake. Here is an example of one of the shots:







